J.K.
Rowling’s Harry Potter
and the Sorcerer’s Stone, is the story of a
boy wizard named Harry Potter and his adventures at Hogwarts School of
Witchcraft and Wizardry. Ronald Weasley is Harry’s classmate and best friend who plays a very important role in Harry’s journey to defeat the evil Voldemort. The
last and youngest of the six Weasley boys to attend Hogwarts, he dreams of
achieving greatness in order to prove that he can live up to the
accomplishments of his five older brothers.
Ron’s
unconditional loyalty to Harry leads him to act with great bravery and unselfishness
which earns him the respect of all of Hogwarts and more importantly of his
brothers.
I like the last sentence of your thesis statement I think that you have something that will be a very interesting read. Ron is one of my favorite characters and I think although he can come across as a simple character I think he has a lot to him which is very valuable to his best friend Harry throughout this novel (and the series). However, I think your introduction could be more enticing. Your introduction just seems like it is too much of a summary.
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