We meet so many characters in the world of Harry Potter, even in the first book alone. They all have unique, and meaningful personalities, which are described perfectly by the author, J.K. Rowling. From the beginning of the story, Albus Dumbledore shows his deep ability to care for and help others. Throughout the story, he seems slightly introverted, but it is not uncommon to see Dumbledore at events, having a good time. He remains calm and observant when needed, but can also use his knowledge and power to turn a situation around.
I like that you chose Albus Dumbledore for your paper. He is such a wonderful father figure in the story. He doesn’t appear as often in the book as he does in the film. However, he still has a very strong and important role. He seems to really love Hogwarts and the students. I think you did a nice job with your introductory paragraph. You chose one character, Dumbledore, and his ability to care for and help others as his personality trait. I like that you also mentioned that he seems like an introvert. From this paragraph you should be able to build a strong paper.
ReplyDeleteI also like the fact you used Dumbledore as your subject. He is a very strong character in the book and presents himself that way. I also thought it was very interesting that you mentioned his ability to care and help others. I thought that showed the softer side of him. Its excellent that you stated that he was an introvert, even though he has extrovert tendencies. I definitely think with this opening paragraph you shouldn't have a hard time writing an excellent paper.
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